611.
I want for nothing
But you, and yet in the wanting
A cave fell through.
612.
Samurai’s master
Said: ‘when writing, avoid I‘.
In love, in war, too.
613.
My higher cloud self
Encouraged me in this way,
But I failed them both.
611.
I want for nothing
But you, and yet in the wanting
A cave fell through.
612.
Samurai’s master
Said: ‘when writing, avoid I‘.
In love, in war, too.
613.
My higher cloud self
Encouraged me in this way,
But I failed them both.
Beautifully written!
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I’ll try not to use the “I” in my poems next time. I’ll see if it works. Nice read.
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Thank you! 😊
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you’re welcome..Be safe.
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